Wesleyan World Storyline #2 – Fun With Laptops

Fun With Laptops 01

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Alternate Tale

After the first storyline in which I introduce all the characters, I created this 2 part introduction using myself talking directly to the reader. I had written this originally because 2 of the first 5 strips had me talking to the reader too (which I eventually scrapped). There just wasn’t anything here; it was just me telling you what comic was coming up next, and I think most people would rather just see the next comic.

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Fun With Laptops 02

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Alternate Tale

Well, here is the author Shawn interacting with the character Shawn. I’m so glad I didn’t go this route when I originally started the story.

The ‘figment’ remark refereed to the scrapped storyline that eventually became the “Displacement” 3 issue comic book.

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Fun With Laptops 03

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An alternate take on the ending. I was never sure sometimes which was the funnier way to end a comic.

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Fun With Laptops 04

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And now, an alternate take on the ending dialogue.

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Fun With Laptops 05

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